Sweeten Memories

Sorry.

2010-11-24T20:59:00.000-08:00

Sorry, for the lateness of everything.
I'm just a kid trying to lift up things.
From now on if things are urgent please don't try us.
We need time.
We're all really busy with school.

I now know how you guys are all feeling in high school, as I'm trying my best not to flunk first semester of my first year. (=

-01xcolour. ♥

Lifeless Soul

2010-11-24T20:55:00.000-08:00

Title: Lifeless Soul
Author: Shadow
Fanfic Site: http://winglin.net/fanfic/hatred/
Reviewed by: BeautifulColours@SweetenMemories

Title 5/5:
The title intrigued me as a reader, I would certainly click on your title ^^

Poster/Background: 3/5
Background is good because it doesn't make your story hard to read but maybe a darker hue will match the mood of your story better. I like your poster too but perhaps a smaller one would be better. (at first when I saw the 'L' I thought "Death Note?? L?" Hahaha XD)

Forewords: 7/10
Your summary is short and straight to the point, it kinda revealed your plot. Even so, your last sentence made me (o.o)? Which is it?

Plot: 10/15
Typical plot. Scene is commonly used. It was well written that it's interesting to me. =)

Originality/Creativity: 8/10
Actually I'm quite surprised she jumped there. I guessed the ending and I was wrong. It was still a common suicide story I guess. I love how you explained things in her diary. Good job =)

Flow: 7/10
One-shot is a one chapter story but it doesn't mean that the length of the chapter must be short. It was too sudden for me.

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation: 10/15
There are few mistakes. Most are 1st draft grammatical error. It can be avoided by rereading and double checking it =D

Characterization: 10/10
Character's emotion is showed very well.

Writing Style: 15/15
I love your writing style. It's descriptive and made me feel as if I'm watching it instead of reading it.

Bonus: 4/5
I enjoyed reading your story. It's always a love story in winglin so your story is refreshing in a sense =) Keep up the good work! ^^

Total: 79/100

Review

2010-11-24T20:51:00.000-08:00

Here are the Review pickups.

Reviews:

Title: Lifeless Soul
Author: Shadow
Status: Not picked up, yet.

Alrighty ~ !

2010-06-21T15:28:00.001-07:00

Orphey here. I just finished the Graphic and Review Request forms and such, so that's all good to go. I wanted to post up an update. Though there's really not that much to update on; just really the request forms. SO yes. We now can take requests! But I'm not sure when our webmistress wants to open the site.

Well we probably have more affiliates. I think we have more staff, too. But okay, I don't want to ramble. Bye for now! ^^

Review Request

2010-06-21T15:26:00.001-07:00

Graphic Request

2010-06-21T15:11:00.000-07:00

Hello~!

2010-06-03T15:19:00.000-07:00

Okay, affies and staff.
Please wait for a while.
We are choosing an opening date.
We got all we need.
Orphey, please MSG me ASAP.
Thanks, and welcome Affies, and Staffs.
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Uhm... tour around and please start getting our site known, but don't ask for any poster/trailer/graphic/review requests yet.
Just staffs, if you want.
But nothing more.
THANKS!
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<3

Annyonghaseyo~!

2010-04-12T20:27:00.000-07:00

Hey, it's me 01xcolour.
I am soo sorry, I am soo behind.
Well, please welcome the staff, and the new staffs.
I will have the profiles, up soon!
Promise.
Anyways, I should be going to bed, now.
It's 11:28PM.
School tomorrow... GYM in the morning.
Anyways, bye.

Hugs and Kisses,
01xcolour.

Blacklisters

2009-12-18T13:54:00.001-08:00

Affies

2009-12-18T09:50:00.003-08:00

Link Us ;

Our Affiliates ;

Links With Out Buttons

01xcolour
xoheartandstarxo
Divine Delusions
The Wicked Cycle
Eternally Smitten
Fateful Dreamer
Miss Coldheartx3
Cuddly Bear Emporium

Pick Ups

2009-12-18T09:50:00.001-08:00

Review

Trailer

2009-12-18T09:46:00.003-08:00

RULES:

[ RULES GO HERE ]

[ link to form ]

Review

2009-12-18T09:46:00.001-08:00

Rule #1
You may request reviews from another site after you've requested from us.

Rule #2
If your story is Rated, please visit the staffs page to select a reviewer that will review rated works.

Rule #3
Please be patient with your request. The amount of time it takes varies with the length of your story. Requests should take no more than 28 days. Some may not even take 3 days; just remember that the time of completion varies with the length of your story.

Rule #4
You must post the review in its own new post. Credit the reviewer and site in the title. Ex. "Review by Orphey @ Sweeten Memories"

Rule #5
Do not bash us if you are unsatisfied with the score of your work. Reviews are to help you improve your story.

Rule #6
You MUST provide a valid email and story URL.

Rule #7
Once your request is completed, you will be notified either by email, comment on your story, or both. It's your choice.

Rule #8
Your story must have a minimum of 6 chapters for us to accept your request. (For oneshots and completed works, this rule does not apply)

Grading Rubric:
Overall Appearance: --/5
Title: --/5
Forewords: --/10
Plot: --/15
Creativity & Originality: --/10
Flow: --/15
Characters: --/10
Spelling/Grammar/Vocab: --/5
Writing Style: --/15
Overall Enjoyment: --/10
Total: --/100

REQUEST

Poster / Background

2009-12-18T09:44:00.000-08:00

Rule #1
You may request for a poster as many times as you like, as long as each one is for a different story.

Rule #2
You may not request for a poster if you already have one.

Rule #3
You may cancel your request at any time as long as you do so before it is completed and sent to the Pick Ups section.

Rule #4
Please provide high quality large images. Low quality images are very difficult to work with.

Rule #5
You may request for any changes in your poster that you find necessary.

Rule #6
Do not forget to provide a VALID email address and/or story URL if we deem it necessary to contact you.

Rule #7
Once your poster is completed, you MUST use it. No acceptions.

Rule #8
Do not forget to credit our site and the designer in your story in a new chapter. Creditting the site does not have to have its own post. Just as long as it is in a new post and people can easily see the origin and designer of the poster.

Rule #9
Graphic Designers take time out of their schedule to complete your request, so please be patient. Requests should take no longer than 15 days.

Rule #10
Once you collect your completed request in the Pick Ups section, do not forget to tag us in the C-Box stating that you've received it.

REQUEST

Request

2009-12-18T09:43:00.001-08:00

Poster / Background

Review

~~Trailer~~

Status

2009-12-16T03:12:00.001-08:00

Staff

2009-12-16T03:11:00.001-08:00

Web-Mistress
Screen Name: 01xcolour
My Site: 01xcolour
Name: Thithi N.
Birthday: August 18th
Nationality: Vietnamese-Canadian
E-Mail: story.music.loveit@hotmail.com
Position: Webmistress, and others I can try... Graphic Designer,& Advertiser
Artworks: x o x o x o x o x o x o
Fanfictions: Love Bird, Last Ticket, Battle Against Friends, Battle Against Friends, Normal Life... Isn't it?, Flower Academy, The Missing Friend
Likes: EVERYTHING
Other Sites: Amis Infinity, Always Keep the Faith, Lost Shadows
Comments: Enjoy, the site! Hope you like it! Come back soon! And I'll try to be a good webmistress. I might be young, but I have years to go!

Co-Web-Mistress
Screen Name: Orphey
Name: Karin
Birthday: April 5th
Nationality: American
Email: moocadoomi@yahoo.com
Positon: Co-Web-Mistress, Graphic Designer
Artwork[s]: Graphic Desinger x o x o x o x o x o x
Fanfictions: I Cry, Haven, Remember
Likes: Graphic Designing, Coding, Gaming, B.E.G, t, Epik High, Drunken Tiger, Gackt, Miyavi, An Cafe, Younha, DongBangShinGi, Ai Otsuka, The Gazette.
Comments: I know I'm not the best designer out there, but I do my best at requests!

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Graphic Designers
Screen Name: icecreamiie
Name: Tina
Birthday: July 7th
Nationality: Australian born Vietnamese
Email: yuki.july7@live.ca
Position: Graphic Designer
Artworks: x o x o x o x o
Likes: icecreammmm~ && chocolate, coffee, cakesssss ^^
Other Sites: Lost Shadows, Smile.Shine.Laugh.Love, Happy Dreams, Sweet Temptation
Fanfiction: I'll Always Be... There For You, Instantaneous Death One-Shot [Completed]
Comments: -Uhhh... comments???- Hey~ its icecreamiie.... nice to meet you and hope you like our site~ !!! ^^
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Screen Name: Olivia15
Name: Olivia
My Site:
Birthday: March 24th
Nationality: Hmong
E-Mail: olivia_ly_89@yahoo.com
Position: Graphic Designer
Artworks: x, o, x, o, x,
Likes: Daniel Henney xD, photoshopping, Ok Taecyeon, Cinderella's Sister ;] and Chun Jeong Myong
Other Sites: Kaleidoscope Kreations
Comments: Daniel Henney, FTW! :]
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Screen Name: Serenity
Name: Serence
Birthday: September 28th
Nationality: Malaysian
E-Mail: serenity.zyx@gmail.com
Position: Graphic Designer
Artworks: x, o, x, o, x, o, x
Likes: KPOP, Internet, Journals, Photography, Language, and Linguistic
Other Sites: Vanilla Sky, Ver-Sah-Tyle, Fairy-Tale Fantasies, Fei Lun Hai, SM-Melodies
Fanfictions|Stories: N/A
Comments: Hey, I know my graphics are not that best. Thus, I'm still learning. But, I will do my best when I do your request, y'know?
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Screen Name: HeartAngel
Name: Dami
My Site: HeartAngel
Birthday: July 14th
Nationality: Vietnamese
E-Mail: viet-girl-nhu@hotmail.de
Position: Graphic Designer
Artworks: x, o, x
Likes: Ice-Cream,YG Entertainment,singing,rapping,dancing,my family & friends and a lot of more :P
Other Sites: CC Munchers, Fairytale Fantasies, Kiwi Fight, Eternally Smitten, Shredded Heart, Shredded Memories (Click on the picture, to go to the NEW site), Secret Melodies
Comments: Hey, I'm HeartAngel and I will promise you guys that will give my best on the request
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Screen Name: MushieMonster
Name: Kat
My Site: MushieMonster
Birthday: January 1st
Nationality: Chinese half Filipino
E-Mail: kat_18.dario@ymail.com
Position: Graphic Designer
Artworks: x
Likes: DBSK, Jaejoong and SNSD
Other Sites: Sweetened Lollipops, Kiwi Flight, Monster Magic, SM-Melodies
Fanfictions|Stories: Flashbacks, Here We Go Again, Vampires First Love, Am I Just A Fan To You?
Comments: Hey everyone! I wish you the best!

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One-Shot Writers
Screen Name: Hann
Name: Hann
Birthday: February 28th
Nationality: Singaporean [(:]
Email: sweetmelody_05@hotmail.com
Position: One-Shot Writer
Artworks: A Short YUNJAE One Shot [Completed], Tea for two, Love
Likes: DBSK! KAT-TUN! & Many more!
Other Sites: Impeccable Melodies
Fan Fictions: Esoteric Amour, Season Changes, Atashi no Kazoku
Comments: I treat all my stories like my babies, so rest assure I'll do my best for your requests! And, I hope to make more friends!

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Trailer Makers
Screen Name: JYCYB
Name: Jennifer
Birthday: February 19th
Nationality: Chinese
Email: jenytchu@yahoo.com
Position: Trailer Maker
Artworks: N/A
Sample of other works: JYCYB Productions, Jenliosis
Likes: Sports, music, a LOT of music ^^
Other Sites: Ver-sah-tyle, Memorable Footsteps, Melancholic-Melancholic, Eternally Smitten, Azin Productions
Fanfictions: Lovers of a Murder
Comments: http://jycyb.livejournal.com
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Screen Name: BeautifulColours
Name: Mei Yen
Birthday: November 23rd
Nationality: Chinese
E-Mail: snowflake_queenie@hotmail.com
Position: Review and One-Shot Writer
Artworks: N/A
Likes: KPOP & JPOP |Big Bang|FT Island|CN Blue|The Gazette|DBSK|Nana Mizuki|Spontania|Tommy February|Kara|SNSD|WaT|Exile|Candies|Cakes|Ice-Cream!|Cookies|Volleyball|ART!!|Music|Puppies|Teddy Bears|Writing|Reading|Horror|Baking
Other Sites: Cuddly Bear Emporium, Timeless Cresendo, Sweetcandy World, Spoongetastic
Fanfictions: Always Be Mine
Comments: Hey~ I might be crazy but I won't bite you because I'll just swallow you whole... nah I a good person you hear me? Feel free to request from me and I'll do my very best =) oh BTW I don't do rated or yaoi or yuri >_<
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Screen Name: **princess**
Name: Grace / Eunhye
Birthday: April 29th
Nationality: Filipino ^^
E-Mail: jjforeverdbsk@hotmail.com
Position: Trailer Maker
Artworks: , , ,
Likes: I like KPOP music so much, I also like to make graphics, and read
Other Sites: KPOP Fanfiction, Dark Side, Dark Angel, Icia Production, Vanilla Sky
Fanfictions: Pieces of Me
Comments: I know am not the best trailer maker. But, I promise to all of you gius tjat I will do my best to do your request ^^... Please support Sweeten Memories ^^ ...

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Reviewers
Screen Name: Darkangel (also known as Animeangel1997)
Name: Tracy N.
Birthday: September 16th
Nationality: Vietnamese living in America :D
Email: tracyngo777@yahoo.com
Position: Reviewer
Artworks: N/A
Sample of other works: Harang's Review, Jumping to my dreams's Review, Could have been to the one - kibbit's Review, A Typical day, Love Installation
Likes: MUSIC!!!! Asian dramas (no I'm not racist XD I just think they're better than American dramas)
Other Sites: I have a bunch, so I can't name them all O_O Sorry!
Fanfictions: Seven Seas High School, High School Delinquent's Slave, Magyk Academy, The Little House of Horror, The Supernaturalists, Takeuhoma Magic Academy, Under One Roof, If Only He Knew [One-Shots], Come Near A Little Closer
Comments: Hey guys! You might have seen me around because I work for a bunch of different sites. I just can’t help it XD And if you notice my stories, I’ve written quite a lot. There’s PLENTY more where that came from. Trust me O.O Anyways, I’ve been a reviewer for a couple of months already, so I have some experience. Sorry, but I don’t do yaoi or yuri! Anyways, peace out!
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Screen Name: ava_lava
Name: ♪ Ava “Rire” Di
Birthday: March 13th
Nationality: Taiwanese-American
E-Mail: artificial_sweetener96@hotmail.com
Position: Reviewer
Artworks: x o
Reviews: Peezshutmouf
Likes: Playing the piano, knitting, writing fanfictions, listening to music (K-Pop and C-Pop), Biology & Physics, dogs & other animals, languages & codes (I know how to write in English, French, German, Morse Code, ASCII, Braille, and a little bit of Chinese), reading, Yunho (DBSK), Taeyang (Big Bang), L (Death Note), and Franz Liszt ♥♥♥
Other Sites: Ver-sah-tyle, stories-ft-heart, Shredded Memories,
Fanfictions|Stories: It Takes Courage, School Life (One-Shot), Trust, Music Is Life
Comments: Hi, my name is Ava, and like my nickname “Rire”, I love laughing like there is no tomorrow (in general, I’m just a happy person). Feel free to request a review from me, but keep in mind that I am really harsh and meticulous with stories, and have a knack at catching the smallest mistakes. However, I promise to help you improve your writing if you still decide to choose me as your reviewer, and hope that you will find my insights valuable and enlightening.
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Screen Name: purple_lilly / Tipay
Name: Stephie
Birthday: July 25th
Natiionality: Filipino
Email: tipay_sss@live.co.uk
Position: Reviewer
Artworks: (WARNING! This is exactly how she placed her words. I, did nothing! Exce[t fix her grammar... ;D) You'll be scared after seeing my crappy art. Just check my fic! (Reffering to Magic Is Everywhere I tell you!)
Likes: Dolphins, SS501!!!!!!!
Other Sites: N/A
Fanfictions: Magic Is Everywher I Tell You!, Because There's You, Why Him?, Be My Valentine, You Only Get One Shot, Silent Words, Loud Music...
I know... lots of uncompleted stories :'(...

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Multi-Tasker
Screen Name: BeautifulColours
Name: Mei Yen
Birthday: November 23rd
Nationality: Chinese
E-Mail: snowflake_queenie@hotmail.com
Position: Review and One-Shot Writer
Artworks: N/A
Likes: KPOP & JPOP |Big Bang|FT Island|CN Blue|The Gazette|DBSK|Nana Mizuki|Spontania|Tommy February|Kara|SNSD|WaT|Exile|Candies|Cakes|Ice-Cream!|Cookies|Volleyball|ART!!|Music|Puppies|Teddy Bears|Writing|Reading|Horror|Baking
Other Sites: Cuddly Bear Emporium, Timeless Cresendo, Sweetcandy World, Spoongetastic
Fanfictions: Always Be Mine
Comments: Hey~ I might be crazy but I won't bite you because I'll just swallow you whole... nah I a good person you hear me? Feel free to request from me and I'll do my very best =) oh BTW I don't do rated or yaoi or yuri >_<
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Screen Name: Ish_siwonderful
Name: Ishwarya
Birthday: September 3rd
Nationality: Indian.
E-Mail: ish_siwon@yahoo.com
Position: Reviewer and One-Shot Writer
Artworks: N/A
Likes: Super Junior, Siwon, DBSK, Big Bang, writing, reading and dancing
Other Sites: Adorable Love, Fahrenheit Fanfics, Sweet Candy
Fanfictions|Stories: Endless Love, Till The End Of Eternity, The Story Of A Monster, The Kim's Addiction, A Part of TVXQ
Comments: Thank you for choosing me!! I'm really happy...

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Artworks means, anything you have done to make your position realistic. As for example, a reviwers artwork is a sample of the reviews they had done. One-Shot Writers are stories, they wrote. ^_^
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Staffs and Co-Webmistresses will also be added later on. Due to my hectic life right now with school and other things. With love, have a great day! ~01xcolour

Hello.

2009-12-08T15:53:00.001-08:00

Hello.
Sorry, but we are currently under constructions.
^_^, we'll be back soon and ready to take on a some new tasks!
We hope to open up around the New Years! And start out FRESH.
`Sweeten Mem.
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In Memories of our old site 'Sweetest Memoirs'